Augustus' Magic

Primary Magic: Shadow Dragon Slayer Magic
Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:
Shadow Dragon Slayer magic is a type of magic that allows the user to gain characteristics similar to that of Shadow Dragons. It is a type of lost magic that is used to slay dragons. It mainly uses the element of the shadows. This magic allows the user to blend into the shadows, become invisible in dark places, track someone's shadow, and hurt someone with the shadow element. It also allows the user to eat his element and go into a stage known as dragon force, a very powerful stage in which the user gains the power of a dragon itself. Even though this magic is very versatile, it can't defend the user, since shadow is quite passive and can't make solid things.
Strengths:
This magic allows the user to be a stealth warrior, since it allows the user to turn into shadows. It also has a lot of potential to deal a lot of damage.
Weaknesses:
It does not have any form of defense since shadows cannot be used to make defensive properties. It also does not allow the user to eat his own shadows.



Name: Shadow Dragon's Senses
Rank: E
Magic Cost: 5
Requirements: The user must be a Shadow Dragon Slayer
Class: Supplementary
Range: 30 meters
Element: Shadow
Effect:
The user gains heightened senses, specifically the power to sense shadows. It gives the user the power to evade an incoming attack just as long as it has a shadow/related to a shadow.
Magic Circle: Black magic circle with dragon symbols
CD: 3 posts
Dur: 3 posts

Name: Shadow Dragon's Cloak
Rank: E
Magic Cost: 5 (5 additional per post)
Requirements: The user must be a shadow dragon slayer
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
Element: Shadow
Effect:
The user surrounds himself with shadows, blurring him into a dark figure. This helps make the user unrecognizable, though at this level it can't help the user hide. The user's image will be also quite blurred, which is good when escaping people who try to capture him.
Magic Circle: Black magic circle with dragon symbols
CD: 2 posts
Dur: As long as the user wants

Name: Shadow Dragon's Wings
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: The user must be a shadow dragon slayer
Class: Offensive
Range: Melee
Element: Shadow
Effect:
The user channels shadows into his hands. His hands become filled with shadows, and then the user charges at the opponent. The shadows take the shape of wings as the user runs. The user strikes the opponent with these shadow wings with full force, dealing considerable amount of damage.
Magic Circle: Black Magical Circle with dragon symbols.
CD: 2 posts
Dur: Instant

Name: Shadow Dragon's Claws
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: The user must be a shadow dragon slayer
Class: Offensive
Range: Melee
Element: Shadow
Effect:
The user jumps into the air, filling himself with shadow magical power. The user then transfer these shadows into his legs, soaring down to the opponent, kicking with full force. It deals a considerable amount of damage.
Magic Circle: Black Magical Circle with dragon symbols.
CD: 2 posts
Dur: Instant

Name: Roar of the Shadow Dragon
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Requirements: The user must be a shadow dragon slayer
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 meters around the user
Element: Shadow
Effect:
This is the signature roar of the shadow dragon slayers. The user gathers shadow energy inside him, transfers it to his mouth, and fires them from his mouth in a form of a huge beam. As a D-rank move, it deals a considerable amount of damage, but as ranks go high, it will deal more damage and destructive scale.
Magic Circle: Black Magical Circle with dragon symbols
CD: 4 posts
Dur: Instant

Ready for approval.

Approved 1/2

Shura has questions. >.>

sorry but i have complaints.

1) Shadow senses reach seems quite far for a E-rank spell
does this spell can be kept active? i think yes, seeing as you have a 5 post duration... quite strong being able to track me completely with only a 5 mana cost, this spell is so strong you almost have no reason to upgrade this in the future...


2) Shadow Dragons Cloak is way to OP, becoming completely invisible and at the same time getting a speed increasement, not only is it unreasonable, it, too is far to strong for a E-rank spell, seeing as you are a shadow dragon slayer i would say blending in with shadows is the furthest you should get with this technique as E-rank spells, meaning getting traked while standing in a shadow would almost be impossible...

3+4) these are okay, after discussing it with Krieg i come to the oppinion that shadows should be able to make phisical damage and therefore these spells are okay...

5) Roar of the shadow dragon: sorry but... this is one is your by far most OPst spell, you can create a shockwave like attack attack in a 10 meter radius around yourself causing heavy damage and all that at D-rank, i am scared seeing what this will be like at B-rank?
- this technique is as good as undodgable
- is to strong
- has nothing to do with shadows

Edited

Approved 2/2 thanks for your understanding ^^ i trust you 100% that you won't abuse your invisible skill :3

Can this be moved to the approved section?