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Ayato D-rank
Posts : 18 Jewel : 2186600 Join date : 2012-05-23
Character sheet Character Name: Magic of character: Mana Bar: (100/100)
| Subject: Sky Dragon Slayer Magic Fri May 25, 2012 4:00 am | |
| Name: Sky Dragon's Healing Wind Rank: E Magic Cost: 5 per post Requirements: Sky Dragon Slayer Class: Healing Element: Wind Effect: The most basic of the Sky Dragon Slayer's healing abilities, a small vacuum is summoned around the area to be treated and applies the Sky Dragon's healing energies. Small cuts and such damaged can can easily be repaired with this, further damage can be treated with this spell but for a longer period of time and a drop in effectiveness in the healing. Magic Circle: A light blue, almost white circle. A cross with wings in the center. CD: 1 post Dur: Minimum 1 post, No maximum.
Name: Moon Drop Sky Push Rank: E Magic Cost: 5 Requirements: Sky Dragon Slayer Class: Supplementary Element: Wind Effect: His knowledge of the sky and how to interact with it allowed him to develop a way to physically interact with it on a closer basis. With the use of either his hands or his feet, the wind can be pushed allowing for a quick shockwave of wind. This can be used to quickly change wind currents, and quickly shift himself through the air by running air quickly along his body. When executed, it appears that the wind pulses around him immediately before he pushes himself. Magic Circle: No magic circle is used. CD: 1 post Dur: Instant
Name: Sky Dragon's Roar Rank: D Magic Cost: 10 Requirements: Sky Dragon Slayer Class: Offense Element: Wind Effect: The user looses a high speed tornado from his mouth carving a path through the air, the violently spinning winds able to cut like swords through most things that come into direct contact with it. Anything near to the tornado is often forced away due to the wind pressure from the technique. Diameter of tornado: ~5-6 meters, Range: ~15 meters Magic Circle: Light blue circle, a dragon's eye with 6 wings coming off of it in the center. CD: 2 posts Dur: 1 post
Name: Sky Dragon's Claw Rank: D Magic Cost: 10 Requirements: Sky Dragon Slayer Class: Offense Element: Wind Effect: The user creates a tornado around their arm or leg, amplifying the force behind the next strike with that limb. Upon impact, the force of the tornado is transferred to the target, cutting as the winds come into contact with the individual or object which was struck. Magic Circle: Light blue circle, a dragon's eye with 6 wings coming off of it in the center. CD: 1 post Dur: 1 post
Name: Sky Dragon Magic - Vernier Rank: D Magic Cost: 10 per target, 5 per post Requirements: Sky Dragon Slayer Class: Supplementary Element: Wind Effect: A supportive spell usable on the caster himself and/or any number of allies. The user summons the winds to his aid, increasing the speed of any and all enhanced by this spell by a small amount (about 5 mph). The more recipients for the spell, the greater the amount of magic power used is. Magic Circle: Light blue circle, a dragon's eye with 6 wings coming off of it in the center. CD: 5 posts Dur: 3 posts
Last edited by Ayato on Wed May 30, 2012 12:09 am; edited 5 times in total | |
| | | Skullkid Shura D-rank
Posts : 139 Jewel : 2217234 Join date : 2012-03-26 Location : Oak Town (Tartaro Guild Member)
Character sheet Character Name: Magic of character: Mana Bar: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Sky Dragon Slayer Magic Sat May 26, 2012 9:27 am | |
| sky push: nope... it sounds like you can push people away which makes it no longer non offensive and e-rank spells aren't supposed to be offensive. Just state exactly what it does, you say it speeds you up, makes you walk in air and such, that is just to many effects for 1 e-rank spell, say clearly what it does, against what it does that and HOW it does it/ describe the spells appearance.
Take out the word great everywhere and don't exagerate when telling what a spell does, these are all e and d rank spells, pretty weak ones which won't do any great damage. | |
| | | Ayato D-rank
Posts : 18 Jewel : 2186600 Join date : 2012-05-23
Character sheet Character Name: Magic of character: Mana Bar: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Sky Dragon Slayer Magic Sat May 26, 2012 7:27 pm | |
| Edit Bump.
The only instance of great left in the list is in regards to the magic energy used for the vernier spell if cast on multiple people at once. The push ability was clarified, i think I did my best of cleaning it up. | |
| | | Skullkid Shura D-rank
Posts : 139 Jewel : 2217234 Join date : 2012-03-26 Location : Oak Town (Tartaro Guild Member)
Character sheet Character Name: Magic of character: Mana Bar: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Sky Dragon Slayer Magic Sun May 27, 2012 3:44 am | |
| okay only some minor things now:
everything needs a duration and cooldown, if a spell won't last longer than a turn out in Instant and for cooldown.. at least one post.
So basicaly your sky push would allow you to for exp. jump up and then by using it send yourself flying towards any direction? couse that would be okay, but smth. llike blocking projectiles or such would be to strong for a E-rank technique and will not be granted, just saying beforehand.
i think your dragon roars a bit long, it's width is okay i think, but having it 10-20 m long is kinda... far..... i'll let shin or another mod have the last word there through since they know better about dragon slayers and their abilitis | |
| | | Ayato D-rank
Posts : 18 Jewel : 2186600 Join date : 2012-05-23
Character sheet Character Name: Magic of character: Mana Bar: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Sky Dragon Slayer Magic Sun May 27, 2012 4:41 pm | |
| Edit Bump.
-Added Durations and Cooldowns where they were missing.
-Edited the roar to say ~15 meters instead of ~15-20, figuring that 15 would be the assumed maximum range.
-And the Sky Push abilities is as you guessed purely a spell geared for moving himself. | |
| | | Skullkid Shura D-rank
Posts : 139 Jewel : 2217234 Join date : 2012-03-26 Location : Oak Town (Tartaro Guild Member)
Character sheet Character Name: Magic of character: Mana Bar: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Sky Dragon Slayer Magic Mon May 28, 2012 3:09 pm | |
| Your last spell is a buff, speeding up you and teammates, therefore it should have a mana cost per turn. Also.. is it stated how much faster on gets? they shouldn't become much faster but onyly a bit, since this is a D-rank spell...
add 10 + 5 magic per post to it, then approved | |
| | | Ayato D-rank
Posts : 18 Jewel : 2186600 Join date : 2012-05-23
Character sheet Character Name: Magic of character: Mana Bar: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Sky Dragon Slayer Magic Wed May 30, 2012 12:11 am | |
| Edit Bump.
Whoops, I didn't realize I had left out the per post amount. Added that in as well as the ballpark amount of speed increased. | |
| | | Kami D-rank
Posts : 83 Jewel : 2185800 Join date : 2012-05-27
| Subject: Re: Sky Dragon Slayer Magic Wed May 30, 2012 3:54 am | |
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Posts : 710 Jewel : 2142435 Join date : 2012-05-17 Location : Magnolia, Fiore
Character sheet Character Name: Ardere Kasai Magic of character: Poison Dragon Slayer Mana Bar: (120/120)
| Subject: Re: Sky Dragon Slayer Magic Thu May 31, 2012 3:03 pm | |
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